From
the moment our production group decided our roles and documentary project
theme, I have conducted vast amounts of research into an array of different
mediums that concern my production role as the editor and our documentary's
subject matter on human and dog relationships and the documentary genre. I’ve
have applied the knowledge and skills acquired from my research to our
production tasks, creative project and it's pilot material and this is what I
shall be reflecting on in this report.
Since
our documentary mode is to be an observational one with interactive mode aspects,
I drew upon Nichol’s honoured taxonomy’s Representing
Reality (1991) and Introduction to Documentary (2001) to acquire more
extensive knowledge about the modes that our documentary the code and
conventions our documentary would follow. I shall be using these readings by
Nichols as a main critical reference throughout for this report and relate it
to how the films I have watched that have inspired me for our group’s
documentary project and how much they meet Nichols’s classification on certain
documentary modes.
There are many documentary films in which I have drawn inspiration
from for our documentary project. One is a Dog’s
Best Friend (Briles 2012) where the film follows many different dog owners
who see there pet as more than just an animal they care for. The filmmaker
establishes a meaningful relationship between the owners and their dog by the
amount of equal frame-time both the dog and their owner receive. A non-diegetic
soundtrack is also added to certain pieces of sequences to emotively engage the
audience into what is being told to them which in turn, sets a tone for the
piece and reinforces its message. For example, when John & Cindy tell us
about the passing of one of their dogs they previously owned, a piano score
accompanies the dialogue. This made me sympathize towards these characters and
the music emphasized my emotions. This editorial technique shall be
incorporated into our final piece once our sound artist decides on at suitable
score available.
Rhythm, pace and tone is set from the backing score, with cuts
occurring between shots simultaneously with the music. I found this to be an
effective technique used with in Dog’s
Best Friend as it kept my attention with the visuals and well as the audio.
Furthermore, the use of fade-to-black as a transition between each character(s)
was used which made me as if the documentary us segmented and unnatural. These
were all possibilities we play with for when it comes to the editing stage of
our documentary so we could emotively manipulate our audiences response just
through our selection of sound score and when to use it.
This
documentary contains performative and observations aspects of documentary. One technique being the use of “pseudomonologue”
for the interview sequences where the visible and audible absence of the
filmmaker allows the social actors dialogue to “appear to deliver the thoughts, impression,
feelings and memories of the individual witness (in this case, a dog owner) to
the viewer.” (Nichols 1991, p.54) We
want to incorporate this method to our documentary as it allows our subjects to
“speak for themselves” as if they are directing their word to the audience
rather than the filmmaker, giving a more personal link between spectator and
subject. The absence of the filmmaker in Dog’s Best Friend is also an
observational characteristic Nichols discusses since
the Briles “adopts a peculiar mode of presence ‘on the scene’ in which he or
she appears to be invisible and non-participatory.” (Nichols 2001, p.112) Therefore,
to adopt this technique for our documentary, I will have to edit out all the
questions we ask as filmmakers from the recorded interviews and transcript our
interviewees response to our questions and select the most emotive response in
order to shape our documentary’s narrative. I will
have to be careful with continuity issues when it comes to editing of our
interviews if we are to use this editorial procedure since the “editing
operates to maintain a logical continuity between individual viewpoints,
usually without the benefit on an overarching commentary, the logic of which
shift to the conversational exchange between filmmaker and social actors.”
(Nichols 1991, p.45)
Another
documentary I learnt from is the interactive and observational documentary
called Lift (Isaacs 2001), where the
filmmaker places himself in a lift in at a tower block of flats located in
North London and people start conversing with him in the lift, where we find
out more about their lives as the narrative progressea. The use of cutaways in
this film is significant as they are used purely to push forward time within
the narrative to ensure the audience is aware it is a new day or another
character we are being introduced to. I liked this technique as I found it a
simple yet effective method of transitioning. We could incorporate this
technique of pushing time within the documentary to advance onto our next
interview simply by using footage from the morning and the afternoon for each
dog and owner relationship we focus on.
Isaacs
made his subjects feel more comfortable around the camera with just by
conversing with simple conversion and a small hand-held camera. The characters
in lift began to form a relationship with Isaacs through his polite small talk
as well as his constant presence. The relationships he made whilst producing
the documentary became strong enough with his social actors that one of the them
offered him some food, and another revealed and opened up to more personal
matter such told us about the passing of a family member. A technique in Lift used by Isaacs, which discussed by
Nichols in concern to the interactive mode, where “the filmmaker need not be a
cinematic, recording eye. He/she may approximate the human sensorium…the
filmmaker’s voice could be heard as readily as any other, not subsequently, in
an organizing voice-over commentary, but on the spot, in face-to-face
encounters with others.” (Nichols, 1991, p.44) From something that could have been so
intrusive and revealing in terms of its concept resulted in quite a touching
and personal documentary and via that form of approach, it is very similar to the
style of documentary we want to produce for our group’s documentary produce. I
want the carefully select people we interview for our project to be wary of the
cameras presence but I want to form a positive relationship with our
interviewees before we interview them so they feel more relaxed in front of the
camera and have a more natural and confident response from them, as it’s clear
in Lift that the more the characters
had interacted with the filmmaker Isaacs in Lift,
the more comfortable they felt around the camera by ignoring it’s presence.
Anvil: The Story of Anvil (Gervasi 2008) is another documentary I watched which
is a performative and sincere rockumentary by Sacha Gervasi. It explores the unfortunate
history of the metal band Anvil and catches up with the band members Steve Kudlow
(Lipps) and Robb Reiner 30 years after the release of their first album ‘Metal
on Metal’ a follow them on their quest to fulfill their dream of being a
successful metal band. This characteristics and qualities this documentary has
holds a firm essences of realism and dramatization within its narrative. This
in mainly conveyed by Kudlow in documentary as we are shown every side of his
life throughout the film. We see him display all types of emotions, such as
happiness, sadness, regret or remorse. Whether it is Kudlow working in a kitchen
or working on stage, we are exposed to his emotional and eccentric character, whilst
Reiner has a more reserved character.
Gervasi allows his audience to see the subjects for who
they truly are and does not exclude any embarrassing or revealing moments
within the documentary. For example, when Lipps loses his temper at the
Croatian club owners as they refuse to pay the band for the gig at their club
and a fight kicks off in which the camera follows with lengthy takes. This is
an identifiable trait used by Gervasi from the observational modes, which let’s
the scene unfold for itself and the filmmaker doesn’t intervene on the action.
Grant summarizes Nichols’s definition of the observation mode as “seeking to be
objective, the unobtrusive camera takes on the role of the audience, watching
and observing the action.” (Natusch, B. &
Hawkins, B. 2014, p.112) and that is exactly what Gervasi does here.
What I really liked about this documentary is how
Gervasi aligns us with these two characters emotionally by building this bond
between character and spectator. It forces us as a spectator to sympathize with
the two characters and makes us hope for them to succeed their boyhood dream.
It reminded me of a more realistic version of This is Spinal Tap (Reiner, 1984).
Since
our documentary’s aim was to provide a deeper awareness into the emotional
connections people build with their pet dogs, and yet I am not a dog owner
personally, I took upon myself to find out more about the forms of
relationships people have built with their pet dogs so I would have a broader understanding
regarding our documentary’s subject matter. I read various articles, journals
and surveys related to this and found the most relevant and interesting piece
called Understanding dog-human
companionship (Dotson, M. J.; Hyatt, E. M. 2008). This journal provided a
strong insight into how and why humans form specific relationships with
their pet dogs, and explains the benefits of people keeping pet dogs and
the nature and meanings of certain dog and humans relationships. For
example, this journal elaborates on Michael Fox’s work on the Interrelations between
humans and pets (Fox 1981) where
he reports that there are four categories of dog and human relationships. "Object-oriented (with the dog as
possession), utilitarian/exploitative (with the dog providing benefits to the
human), need-dependency (with the dog as companion or child surrogate), and
actualizing (with the dog as a respected significant other)." (Dotson
& Hyatt 2008, p.458) He explains that dogs also have identical emotions to
humans and that is why such strong bonds can be formed between humans and their
dogs. From all my research behind our subject matter, I can deduce that
research has confirmed that there’s also a psychological bond between humans
and their pets in terms of satisfying each other’s needs such as unconditional
love and affection, friendship and companionship. It is this message that we want to try and
convey to our audience with our observational documentary by showing these
emotional and almost humanistic bonds people form with their pet dogs and we
have constructed our questioning to our interviewees.
In
terms of editorial-related reading research, I have been taking notes from Walter
Murch's editing bible In the Blink of an
Eye: A Perspective on Film Editing (Murch 2001). One of his key practices,
which I have been incorporating into our pilot material and the project as a
whole, is what he called the rule of ‘Rule of Six’. This is a method of
analysing what makes a good cut. Murch elaborates that there are six sections
of criteria to an ideal cut which are (in order of importance) are emotion,
story, rhythm, eye-trace, two-dimensional plane of screen and finally
three-dimensional space of action. Murch prioritises emotion over the other
characteristics that you should look for in a good cut and goes on to say that “what
they (the audience) finally remember is not the editing, not the camerawork,
not the performances, not even the story – its how they felt.” (Murch, 1992,
p.18) Thus, by incorporating this
editing technique we shall achieve our goal in making our audience participate
in the documentary by making it emotionally engaging through the manipulation
of our footage in the editing process.
With
regards to permission and consents needed for our documentary, we would
definitely need to acquire consent permission from our interviewees to film our
interviews. Therefore, we would ensure we would get each individual shot an
interview with to fill out a consent form before recording. We also decided to
film a majority of our documentary in outdoor, public locations so that we
wouldn’t need to get location permissions to film there. On the other hand,
since we are making an observational documentary, even though our subjects are
wary of the camera, others in the public area where the camera will be place are
not. We’ll have to be wary of this as some dog owners may not to be filmed in a
public place. Also, with our musical score, we have to be wary that we do not
use any copyrighted or unlicensed material and when we do find our appropriate
score, we shall be sure to give its produce a credit in our documentary.
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